tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212954375569908765.post5273333327098782637..comments2016-08-03T09:41:53.608-07:00Comments on MJB Saunders: Short Story Thriller Thursdays #7- ComaMaxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12894260881544829220noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212954375569908765.post-84236077725851671622014-04-27T02:25:51.645-07:002014-04-27T02:25:51.645-07:00Thank you for commenting Luke. And thank you, that...Thank you for commenting Luke. And thank you, that really means a lot.Maxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12894260881544829220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212954375569908765.post-75576472725961343982014-04-26T22:40:29.033-07:002014-04-26T22:40:29.033-07:00Very well written story. It flowed smoothly and qu...Very well written story. It flowed smoothly and quickly.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15859632766944794368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212954375569908765.post-69982781897593161202014-04-24T16:45:18.085-07:002014-04-24T16:45:18.085-07:00Wow, this is really good. The mind of a coma patie...Wow, this is really good. The mind of a coma patient has so much mystery to it.<br /><br />A small typo, a the start you say: "The child wondered aimlessly..." but in the context, I believe you meant wandered.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07169443153762310882noreply@blogger.com